Maggie’s heart pounded harder than her footsteps on the concrete. Her feet ached, but her mind only thought of David. Already ten minutes late, she hoped he hadn’t given up on her.
Her heart fell when she saw the unoccupied park bench by the old-fashioned lamp post. Their meeting place. Maggie dropped onto the bench and hunched over, forehead resting in her hands. She willed herself not to cry.
Soon, the wooden slats on the bench bowed and Maggie jerked her head up. “David,” she whispered, then grinned. She didn’t want to appear too eager, but she couldn’t hide her joy.
“Margaret, you look beautiful.”
Maggie blushed. She looked down and touched her hair in a nervous gesture. “Thank you.”
“I worried you wouldn’t come,” David said, slipping his hand around hers.
“I’m at the store buying milk, you know.”
David smiled. “You sneaky little liar,” he teased. “You escaped prison.”
“Oh, stop. She means well.” Maggie shook her head. “She thinks you’re only after one thing.”
He leaned so close, his lips brushed her ear. “She’s right.”
Maggie gasped.
“I’m after your heart, Margaret Ruth Martin.”
He already had that, but she couldn’t admit it just yet. Instead, she summoned her voice of reason. “But we only met three weeks ago.”
“It feels like longer. Time passes more swiftly for us.” He scooted closer.
Maggie drew an uneasy breath when David’s lips moved toward hers. She wanted to run away, but she wanted to taste his kiss. Her heart skipped a beat when their lips touched.
Her cell phone chimed and they both jumped.
She let out a nervous giggle. “At our age… can you imagine?” She fumbled to display the message. “My daughter is worried.”
“She can wait.” David slid the phone from her grasp and set it on the bench. He cupped her face in his hands. “Margaret, you may be seventy-five, but you don’t look a day over sixty.”
“Why, that’s the sweetest—”
His kiss smothered her words.
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This is my entry in the Trifecta weekly writing challenge. We were asked to write a 33-333 word response (mine came in at 333 owrds) using the following word and definition:
UNEASY – marked by lack of ease : awkward, embarrassed <gave an uneasy laugh>
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As always, I appreicate you stopping by to read my story.
I love this! how sweet. I cant wait to grow old with my sweetie!
Thanks, Deana! I’m glad you liked this story.
Could not help but thing aww at the end. Well written
Thanks so much, Ketunlaulu! I appreciate you taking time to read my story.
Well done-I loved this piece!!! Twice you had me expecting something completely different!! At first I was thinking she was escaping her husband, then I thought she was escaping her mom.
Funny – I didn’t see the escaping the husband part when I wrote it. Reading it again since your comment, I see how it could look that way. I wish I could claim the double twist was intentional, but I’m not that clever 🙂 Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Rachael!
Like Rachel, I first thought husband, then thought mother! Excellent piece, Janna. I smiled with my face and my heart at the ending.
Thanks, Amy. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and that it left you with a smile 🙂
“But we only met three weeks ago.” change to “But we met only three weeks ago.”
You’re right, Carl…it is grammatically incorrect. I left it that way because I felt like that’s how the character would speak it. (Like, “we just met three weeks ago.”) Thanks for your careful reading 🙂
Shuckins. That der makin purrfect cents.
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LOL … great twist there!
Thanks, Widdershins. I like twists whenever I can think of them 🙂
I just love the twist!!! Daughter should quit worrying – they deserve some happiness. I’m Okay with ‘only met’ “met only” sounds heavy-in-the-mouth.
Thanks, Jester Queen. I almost changed the ‘only’ to ‘just’ to avoid the issue, but I liked ‘only better 🙂 I think the daughter needs to lighten up, as well. Mom may only have a few years left, she should live it happily!
So true. My grandfather and his travelling companion enjoy every minute of each other’s company, and none of us begrudge them any of it.
Good for them, Jester Queen. Often, the later years can be lonely. They’re much happier spent with someone else.
Aw, this is just too cute, Janna! I love plot twists, and I hadn’t guessed that it was the Mom, not the Daughter, who was romancing. Good one!
I’m glad it wasn’t obvious, Debbie. I tried not to give it away too early 🙂 Thanks for stopping by to read it!
cute story 🙂
Thanks for reading it, Patty. I appreciate it!
Sounded very old fashioned . . . until the cell phone chimed it’s interruption. Lovely write, Janna.
They are having an old-fashioned courtship. Technology does tend to barge in on our moments 🙂 Thanks for taking time to read the story, Nancy.
Oooohhh! Perfect! I just love the romance and the thrill for her/them being in their golden years. It’s so cute that she’s worried and escaped and that her daughter called. and that e put her phone aside!
Yeah, sometimes we have to put the gadgets aside and live in the moment 🙂 I appreciate you stopping by to read the story and I’m glad you enjoyed it, Gina!
You knocked another one out of the park, Janna! Oh, it was IN the park, wasn’t it? Sweet.
Hahaha! Good one, Patti 🙂 I normally avoid romance stories, so I was a bit uneasy about tackling this one. I’m glad you took some time to check it out!
Aw – so beautiful!! 😀
Thanks so much for reading, Dianne!
This is so sweet.
I appreciate you stopping by to read it, Ruby.
Aw, this is sweet. Loved the twist at the end. It’s kind of rare to read about the elderly finding love. Well done.
Many are still young at heart, but sometimes we don’t see them that way. Thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts on the story, Lucy!
First kiss? It’s a very sweet memory, that each takes into the heart with him.
A first kiss is forever, even if the relationship doesn’t last. Glad you stopped by, Newwhitebear 🙂
I loved the ending twist on this.
Thanks, Annette. I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
Great twist! Very well done.
Thanks, GodGirl. I appreciate you reading the story 🙂
Oh, this is fantastic! I love it! You totally surprised me.
Yay! I am pleased their age wasn’t apparent until the end. Thanks for stopping by to read it, Christine 🙂
Very sweet and a nice twist. I could see the characters. Nice job.
Thanks so much, Kelly. I appreciate you reading it.
Once again, amazingly well done. You’ve set the bar very high.
I’m glad you liked the story, Jeanna. Thanks for your kind words 🙂
Well done. I thought she was a young kid at first as well. The conversation flowed nicely and felt very natural.
Thanks, Wisper. It’s helpful to know the conversation seemed believable 🙂
Oh, how I love this, Janna! Here I am picturing a pair of young kids… Wonderful story, and I love his compliment to her! This really leaves a sweet aftertaste in my mouth. 🙂
Thanks, Sandra. I’m glad you liked the story of the not-so-young new lovebirds 🙂
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!! Waaaaah – that was SOOOOOO sweet. LOVE IT. I want to read more.
Your comment made me smile, Kenya. Thanks so much for reading- I’m glad you liked the story 🙂
Oh I just loved that twisty ending! HA! 😀
Thanks, Linda! Appreciate you reading it 🙂
that ending was AWESOME!! Definitely unexpected and SO freakin’ adorable!!!
Thanks so much, Carrie. I like that you didn’t expect the ending – that’s what I was going for!
Love it! I want to call it a twist, but that carries negative connotations in my mind — so let’s say it’s a slow realization. From the prison reference, where the reader’s mind starts trying to work out what’s going on, there’s a great unfolding to the end. Really nice.
Hehehe…well, there are different kinds of twists. Confusing, off-the-wall ones aren’t so fun; subtle plays on assumptions are fun, though. I’m glad you liked the story, Brian. Thanks for reading 🙂
Aw! The reversal here is so charming; I love that they’re feeling impetuous even at their age.
Thanks, Annabelle. I don’t think new love is any less nerve-racking with age.
Oh, what a twist! 🙂 I am worried for her though – that David better be a good man. He is too fast.
Oh, if he gets out of line, I’m pretty sure her daughter would straighten him out 🙂 Thanks for checking out the story, Imelda!
What a lovely surprise at the end of this one… and extremely well-written. I love it!!
I’m happy you liked this story, Jonesing. Thanks so much for reading!
Nice sense of urgency here. As it is with new love at any age. Thanks for playing along. Come on back soon.
Thanks for reading, Trifecta!
Love it! I hope Maggie goes for it 🙂
She just might, Victoria 🙂 Thanks for reading the story!
Awwwww! So beautiful. I got a little something in my eye reading this.
Maybe it was allergies, Tina 🙂 (That’s what I say when I get misty eyed…but no one buys it!) Thanks for stopping by to read the story.
Ahh!! so sweet! And the twist was a real good one! Enjoyed the piece
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Sayori
Thanks so much for reading, Sayori. I’m happy you enjoyed the story!