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Robert Wells surfaced after he swam the Columbia River near the Hanford site. “Huh… I feel fine.”
He faced the media covering his 1960 pollution protest.
They screamed.
The River Monster was born.
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This is my response to Trifecta’s weekend prompt, which was to “give us the 33 words that follow this illustration. What happens next?”
I normally don’t do ‘creepy’ but I’m making it my challenge this year to get into the Halloween spirit. For those not familiar with the Columbia River or the Hanford site, here’s a bit of what I found on Wikipedia (click here if you want to read more:)
Established in 1943 as part of the Manhattan Project in the town of Hanford in south-central Washington, the site was home to the B Reactor, the first full-scale plutonium production reactor in the world. Beginning in the 1960s, scientists with the U.S. Public Health Service published reports about radioactivity released from Hanford, and there were protests from the health departments of Oregon and Washington. In the 1980s, Hanford Health Information Network reports concluded that residents who lived downwind from Hanford or who used the Columbia River downstream were exposed to elevated doses of radiation that placed them at increased risk for various cancers and other diseases.
Have you heard of the musical Zombie Prom? I feel like the idea must have come from that river.
I have not heard of the Zombie Prom. Maybe the river was an inspiration? Thanks for stopping by to read this, Megan!
So that’s how it all started! I enjoyed your short tale.
🙂 I guess this could be America’s version of the Loch Ness?
I wasn’t familiar with that story, Janna. Thanks for educating me — in such a memorable way, ha!
I don’t know how much of an education this was, Debbie! The pollution in the river is real, but as far as I know, there isn’t a river monster. With all that nuclear waste, I don’t think I’d want to comb the waters to make sure 🙂
Reblogged this on Change is Never Ending.
Thanks for reading and reblogging, Duke!
you know for you I will do anything.
I appreciate your support, Duke!
I bet your sons loved this one!
They might, Nancy…I wrote it after they left for school, and they haven’t seen it yet 🙂
I love this creepy prompt, Jannat:)
Thanks, Vishal! I appreciate you taking time to read it 🙂
This was a fun little read. Nice!
Thanks so much, Tonya! I love the 33-word challenges 🙂
Hmmm…I live not too far from the Columbia River. From now on, I’m only going to take pictures of it;) Great little piece, Janna!
Oh, I’m sure it’s safe Valerie…they say it’s all cleaned up now 🙂
On second thought, appreciating from a distance might be safer!
Oh my, well I guess I’ll just be sunning myself on the sand of that River….you did a great job with getting us into the “spirit!”
TGIF.
I’m not sure I’d trust the sand, either 🙂 Glad you stopped by, Kir!
Brilliant! And that picture is really helpful because I am struggling with my zombie faces. I find it hard to draw them at a distance and it not just look like a green blob of goo 🙂
The artist did a good job on the picture. (I don’t draw or paint much, so I doubt I could do it!) Good luck with the zombies, Catherine. Hope to see them spooking your blog sometime this month 🙂
It seems you can’t go swimming any where any more. I loved this.
Well, there might be a “Swim at your own risk” sign – they really mean it 🙂 Thanks for reading, Glynis!
Love it! Great take on the prompt. Poor Mr. Wells. 🙂
Thanks, Suzanne! He went to drastic measures to prove his point 🙂
I like your take on the prompt. It’s got oomph! .! Poor Mr. Wells though. 🙂
Yeah, the swim may not have been the best idea, but it got attention 🙂 Thanks for reading, Imelda!
That was fantastic Janna! The poor guy… I’m sure this is how most monsters are born 😉
Thanks, Neetika! We must be careful where we swim 🙂
Funny with a touch of truth. Great job!
Thanks, Draug! It was fun to learn something new while I researched this one.
Simple and elegantly written.
Thanks so much for reading, Yarnspinnerr!
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Cute. I like the historical significance.
I’m glad you liked it, Margitsage!
This reminds me a lot of the Seinfeld episode where kramer began swimming in the polluted Hudson River for exercise. Needless to say, it did not turn out well. Your story turned out well. Good work!
Oh, I remember that episode. Kramer wasn’t normal to begin with and those swims sure didn’t do him any favors 🙂 Thanks for reading, Cobbie!
Holy moly! The true aspect of this really adds to the creepiness.
FYI, I was really hoping you would use this promp to do another installment of Darlene’s story–the zombie dude could’ve been her dead husband. Lol!
Stories based loosely on truth are creepy to me, too, Ivy! Good idea about Darlene’s husband. Too bad I didn’t think about that 🙂
wow, an entire story in 33 words. amazing.
You will be getting a vote from me this weekend, *fist bump*
I’m glad you enjoyed the story, Lance! Thanks for reading 🙂
Good one, Janna.
Quite often the monsters swim within us – from the food, water, air etc that we consume. Genetically modified – a nice word for ‘crap’ I reckon.
Peace and blessings,
Eric
I try not to think about that, Eric. If I spent too much time contemplating the pollutants, I wouldn’t be able to find much joy in life at all 🙂 As always, thanks for reading and for offering your thoughtful comment.
A truly brilliant response to the challenge!
Thanks so much for reading, El Guapo! I have to say your contact lens take was quite creative 🙂
Wow that is some imagination! The Columbia River (i wasn’t aware about it) makes a great twist to this 33 word plot!
Thanks, Nea! I didn’t know about it either until I did some research on pollution. (When I saw the photo, I knew I wanted to go that route.)
Cool research 🙂
Thank you, Nea 🙂
Great idea! Well writen!
Thanks for reading, Mademoisellemv!
Headline: Robert not so “Wells” After Swim
Awesome job with this prompt.
Haha, true- he was not well at all! Thanks for reading, Gene 🙂
Great take on the prompt Janna. Love it when we learn something, too. Nice write! Thanks for linking up!
Fun challenge 🙂
That was polution does. Great take
Pollution = bad 🙂 Thanks for reading, Bjorn!
It was just a science experiment, right? Some of the things we learn–creepy. I liked your story.
I’m glad you liked it, Patti. He was an environmental activist before it was “in” to be one!
Bit hard on poor Robert, being a river monster and all. C’est la vie.
Well, not as high-profile as the Loch Ness, but it’s not a bad gig 🙂 Thanks for reading, Michael!
A lesson there eh Janna?We are creating river monsters and other monsters everyday by polluting our environment mindlessly-loved this take on the prompt-apart from it being very entertaining,it had a moral too:-)
Thank, Atreyee! Yes, I try not to think about all the pollutants I’m exposed to every day. However, it could make a valid excuse for some of the odd stories my mind comes up with 🙂
Lol!Glad that your mind latches on those “pollutants”-readers like me reap the benefit 😉
Aw thanks, Atreyee. I hope I’m not poisoning your mind 🙂
Ha!ha!You think that is possible Janna 😉