A Sinful Woman
Labeled. Shunned.
Stripped of self-worth;
Lonely and hurt,
She begged from her heart.
Judged. Condemned.
By fellow men;
Defined by her sins,
She came to repent.
Cheap. Broken.
Surrendered her dignity;
There at His feet,
She began to weep.
Saved. Grateful.
Despite transgressions;
And stained reputation,
Her debt was forgiven.
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(based on Luke 7:36-50 – Jesus Anointed By A Sinful Woman)
Thanks to God Girl’s recent post about this passage, this story was fresh in my mind. When I saw the Trifecta prompt, this was the first thing to come to my mind.
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The Trifecta Week 20 prompt is cheap with the following definition:
cheap adj \ˈchēp\ – (a) of inferior quality or worth : tawdry, sleazy <cheapworkmanship> (b) contemptible because of lack of any fine, lofty, or redeeming qualities <feeling cheap>
The sins are on the heads of her oppressors
You’re fast tonight, Carl! I think it’s interesting how people can be so judgmental, seeing as though we all live with some kind of sin.
Yep, and sin is sin is sin is sin……………… This is a good one! 🙂
Thanks for reading, Tikk Tok. You’re right – sin is sin. Period.
Beautiful poem based on the scripture. The photo is perfect, too. Blessings to you, Janna…
Thanks, Carol Ann. I’m glad you enjoyed this one 🙂
This is just beautiful!- so glad you were inspired to write it (and thanks for the mention). This woman’s legacy continues in so many wonderful forms! And so does, above all, His legacy of grace and abundant mercy…
Thanks, GodGirl! Your post was a blessing and inspiration to me 🙂
Excellent! 🙂
Thanks for stopping by to read/comment on it, Linda!
Great job with this!
Thanks, SuziCate…I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on it 🙂
very nice. It flows beautifully
Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, Carrie!
This post is interesting e deep.
Congratulations.
As always, I appreciate your support. Thanks for reading and sharing your comment, Newwhitebear!
Beautifully written…
Thank you, Jeanne!
Very nice poem 🙂
Thanks, Laciejay. I’ve never written a poem based on scripture before, so it was a fun exercise 🙂
Awesome. My thirteen years of Catholic School is paying off!
You really did this justice in your poem. I always loved this lesson he was trying to teach Simon. Beautiful!
Thanks so much for your huge compliment, According to Mags! My ‘aha’ moment in this story came when Jesus used the example of the forgiven bank debts…how Jesus made Simon tell him who would be more grateful (the one with the most debt) and then related it to sinful people.
Very nicely done. Lovely.
Thank you so much for reading, Kgwaite!
Beautiful poem. I am so in awe of someone who can write like this. I, unfortunately, can not!
Thanks for your nice compliment, Gina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on the poem 🙂
Wow – that’s really beautiful!
Thanks, Libby. I’m glad you liked it!
I love how you used something that obviously means much to you and put your own voice to it. Great response to the prompt.
Thanks, Chris. I’ve never written a poem about a Bible verse before, so it was a fun challenge, indeed!
What an interesting take on the challenge word of the week. I found it fascinating, sad, upsetting and soothing, which is quite the gamut of emotions in such a short space. Well done!
Good luck on the challenge!
Thank you for stopping by to read it and share your thoughts, Mrs. One Day. I’m glad it made you feel something – evoking emotions is a writer’s dream 🙂
Isn’t it though? I know that when I hear that from a reader, I’m in heaven… absolute heaven!
I think it’s pretty common. Even if the character is despicable, we want to reader to feel it 🙂
We do indeed!
I liked the poem’s pattern, where the first line of each stanza introduced the ideas to follow and the rest of the stanza fleshed those points out.
Thanks, Jester Queen. I appreciate you stopping by to read it!
Sin is separation. The best part of this woman’s story is that she understood the distance, and sought to close the gap. Beautiful job, Janna!
I found out far too late that I had missed the deadline for this one, but I have posted an entry anyway – here it is:
http://paulatohlinecalhoun1951.wordpress.com/2012/03/29/theme-less-thursday-7/
Thanks, Paula. I so enjoyed writing this one! I like that she worshipped Jesus without shame and without apology.
Thanks for linking up again, Jenna. Nice modern twist on a very familiar passage of scripture. There’s a really good flow to this. I love how she begins ‘condemned’ but ends ‘Saved. Grateful’. Nice job indeed
I’m glad you liked the flow of my poem. I appreciate you reading and sharing your comments!
A beautiful poem, a powerful story…
Great work Jannatwrites
Thanks so much, Rerodan. I appreciate your visit!
This is great, Janna!!
Thanks, Patti! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Nice , powerful storyline ..
Thanks, Evelyn. I appreciate you stopping by to read it and share your thoughts!