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Candy Or A Kiss?

August 24, 2012

Millicent’s bet:

First to swings, wins.

He yanked her ponytail

And ran.

She skunked him.

Couldn’t swallow his pride,

Had to weasel out of the kiss instead:

Seven was too young for marriage.

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I tried to get in the mind of a seven-year-old boy for the Trifecta weekend challenge, which is community-judged this week.  Poor guy never considered he might lose (to a girl)!

If you like it, please visit the Trifecta site on Sunday (after 8PM Eastern time) to vote.  If you don’t like my entry, you should still visit the site to vote because I promise you’ll find something you do like among the entries   The writing prompt given is:

This weekend we want you to write a 33-word response using the
name of an animal as a verb
.  Some examples are: to dog, to snake, to bear,
to duck. . .you get the idea.  Write about anything you want and use whichever
verb tense you need, but give us an animal as a verb in there somewhere.

In honor of Trifecta, I used three animals.  I’m either an over-achiever or a suck-up…you call it :)

Oh, I almost forgot – if you want to write your own entry, check out the Trifecta site by clicking on the Tricycle picture to see full instructions.  Happy writing (and reading!)

64 Comments leave one →
  1. August 24, 2012 11:05 AM

    Suck up, yeah I vote suck up LOL! Boy you are ambitious, 3 animals. Good job Janna!

    • August 24, 2012 8:35 PM

      Well, I figured promising chocolates for votes would be going too far :) Thanks for reading, Tessa!

  2. August 24, 2012 11:08 AM

    Great job! I’m in awe of your 3 animals!

  3. August 24, 2012 11:20 AM

    oh lovely! This is so heartwarming. Very well done, Janna. :-)

    • August 24, 2012 8:37 PM

      Thanks, Imelda! It wasn’t long ago that I asked my six-year-old what he thought marriage was and he told me it was kissing. I thought it was cute, so I had to use it :)

  4. August 24, 2012 11:26 AM

    Sweet story! Light and fun – appropriate to the subject matter. Good job

    • August 24, 2012 8:41 PM

      Thanks for reading, Phil! Definitely wanted to lighten it up for the weekend :)

  5. August 24, 2012 11:49 AM

    A great job! Your post are always nice and amusing.

    • August 24, 2012 8:41 PM

      I’m glad you continue to read and share your thoughts on my posts, Newwhitebear. Have a beautiful weekend :)

  6. August 24, 2012 12:04 PM

    Aw – cute. Great post once again.

    • August 24, 2012 8:42 PM

      Thanks so much for reading, Ruby! I can’t wait to see what everyone else has done :)

  7. August 24, 2012 12:20 PM

    Clever and multiple takes on the prompt. This was a fun one!

  8. August 24, 2012 4:06 PM

    Good use of the prompt — weasel and skunk are appropriate animals for seven year olds. :)

    • August 24, 2012 8:43 PM

      Ha! I didn’t think about that, but you’re right…those are seven-year-old verbs :) Thanks for reading, Annette!

  9. August 24, 2012 4:45 PM

    This is so visual!

  10. August 24, 2012 6:44 PM

    Well done, Janna. You have my vote . . . and I’ll do my best to remember to swing by and actually register it. ;)

    • August 24, 2012 8:44 PM

      Aw, thanks, Nancy! I’m glad I got your vote even if you don’t remember to register it :) (I’ll stick with it being the thought that counts.)

  11. August 24, 2012 6:55 PM

    Oh, very nice. Well done.

  12. August 24, 2012 8:43 PM

    Very well done! With multiple prompt responses, yay!

    • August 24, 2012 8:46 PM

      Thanks, Sandra! I appreciate you stopping by to read it. I’m so behind on reading, I missed your Trifecta entry for last week…I’m checking it out tonight!

  13. August 24, 2012 9:45 PM

    This was sweet and not at all forced, Janna. Man, I was tempted to put in extra animals, but there are two in one and one in the second… Nice write! Peace, Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/08/24/two-for-trifecta-animals-as-verbs/

    • August 24, 2012 9:49 PM

      Thanks so much for your comment, Amy. I had hoped it flowed naturally. (I had my younger son in mind when I wrote it.) I can’t wait to see what you came up with :)

  14. August 25, 2012 2:09 AM

    Very sweet! Loved it :D

  15. August 25, 2012 8:30 AM

    Hee hee! You just took over first place on my list as I read. Well done Janna!!

    • August 25, 2012 12:11 PM

      Thanks, Brenda. I’m glad you liked it. I hope it stays on your list after you read another couple entries :lol:

  16. August 25, 2012 8:49 AM

    Nice. I must be dense but I only saw two animals in your Trifecta unless ponytail is the third.

    • August 25, 2012 12:12 PM

      Well, Patty, you probably found weasel and skunked…the third one was swallow (like the bird.) That last one was sneaky. Thanks for reading :)

  17. August 25, 2012 8:49 AM

    Wait a minute… isn’t marriage solely about kissing? What the heck did I say “I do” to anyways?

    • August 25, 2012 12:16 PM

      I know, right? I’m not sure I knew everything I signed up for, but I learned to adapt! Thanks for reading, Marie. Your comment made me smile :)

  18. August 25, 2012 9:52 AM

    I’m competing against you this week I guess, but you’re getting my vote.
    Great story, great use of the prompt!

    • August 25, 2012 12:17 PM

      Thanks, El Guapo. Your comment is a huge compliment. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and the animals :)

  19. Gina permalink
    August 25, 2012 12:52 PM

    Skunked is a perfect verb for oh so many things! Seven is definitely too young for kissing but definitely marriage promises. Best to weasel, too! Fun!

    • August 25, 2012 8:45 PM

      Yeah, marriage talk should at least wait until ten :) (only kidding, of course!) Thanks for stopping by to read the story, Gina.

  20. August 25, 2012 1:53 PM

    SO cute! Great job!

  21. August 25, 2012 5:21 PM

    Good for her! Ha! Enjoyed this little read. :D

  22. August 25, 2012 6:55 PM

    Cute story, we’ve all been there! Great job on the menagerie, too.

    • August 25, 2012 8:47 PM

      I love the innocence of young children. Thanks for reading the story, Patti!

  23. debseeman permalink
    August 25, 2012 11:01 PM

    This is cute. I like. :)

  24. August 26, 2012 5:07 AM

    that was adorable. i sometimes wonder what happened to that innocence of youth.

    • August 26, 2012 9:57 PM

      Yeah, those are good days. It makes me sad to see the innocence of my own children eroding way as they get older. Thanks for reading, Renada!

  25. August 26, 2012 6:02 AM

    At 14 he’d give anything for that kiss. Now at 63, I would too.

  26. August 26, 2012 6:08 AM

    Awww. :)

  27. C.D. Tolliver permalink
    August 26, 2012 11:05 AM

    It’s a good thing he didn’t goose her.

    • August 26, 2012 10:02 PM

      Ah, another animal…would’ve been a good fit if I had a few more words :) Glad you stopped by, C.D..

  28. debseeman permalink
    August 26, 2012 12:40 PM

    Really like the innocence of the piece and great job with the prompt.

  29. August 26, 2012 2:21 PM

    This was adorable! Nice work with three animals. I used two – I should have gone for the trifecta, though.

    • August 26, 2012 10:04 PM

      Thanks, Christine. I’m glad you liked it! I didn’t plan on three animals, but when I realized they were there I had to pay tribute to Trifecta :)

  30. August 26, 2012 2:52 PM

    How sweet. And you know I’m partial to the multi-animal usage. :)

    • August 26, 2012 10:05 PM

      Thanks, ODNT! I think you win when it comes to multi-animal usage, though :)

  31. August 26, 2012 9:14 PM

    Perfect. Loved “skunked.” Too young to marry indeed. Why do they start all this lovey lovey stuff when they’re so little?! My oldest daughter was six when she first decided she needed a boyfriend. Ugh.

    • August 26, 2012 10:08 PM

      Childhood is scary for parents, Flipside. Last year, in Kindergarten, a neighbor’s daughter proclaimed that she was going to marry our son. Yikes! I had to laugh though, because at the moment it was relayed to me, my five-year-old son was playing a fight scene (with himself) and tripped over his feet. As he lay sprawled out on the ground, I had to agree that my boy was quite the catch :)

      Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.

  32. August 28, 2012 12:00 AM

    Congratulations on your votes. I like your assumed identity!

    • August 28, 2012 7:14 AM

      Thanks, Viv! I’m so glad I slipped back into my normal identity before I learned to burp the ABCs (a skill my six-year-old wanted to demonstrate for me, but I politely declined to be his audience :) )

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